tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post6537419137961011010..comments2023-09-09T09:33:43.814-05:00Comments on Meg Miller Writer / Arts and Crafts Enthusiast: ReviMo Day 1 with Renee LaTulippeMegMillerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17153642746148170975noreply@blogger.comBlogger113125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-72208938834092417242015-01-18T19:30:26.838-06:002015-01-18T19:30:26.838-06:00Looking forward to applying your awesome advise! T...Looking forward to applying your awesome advise! Thanks! :)Donna Rossmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-7173434396558634202015-01-18T00:59:55.500-06:002015-01-18T00:59:55.500-06:00Love the color coded analysis!Love the color coded analysis!Annie Baileynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-21506690291180073982015-01-17T13:47:44.836-06:002015-01-17T13:47:44.836-06:00Renee, I am reading my work aloud... I hope it hel...Renee, I am reading my work aloud... I hope it helps me! Thank you for your great ideas!Deirdre Sheridan Englehartnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-63122474751884062772015-01-17T10:14:56.656-06:002015-01-17T10:14:56.656-06:00I learned SO much from your post! Thank you so muc...I learned SO much from your post! Thank you so much!Lauren Kersteinnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-22612518029249766402015-01-16T19:15:21.835-06:002015-01-16T19:15:21.835-06:00Such a colorful lesson, Renee. Thank you. ~Suzy Le...Such a colorful lesson, Renee. Thank you. ~Suzy LeopoldSuzynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-23317082682618578512015-01-14T00:53:13.769-06:002015-01-14T00:53:13.769-06:00Wow. I learned a lot from your post today! Now a...Wow. I learned a lot from your post today! Now all I have to do is apply it to my own works. Thanks Renee.Angela Turnernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-81933954185296080042015-01-13T10:06:39.338-06:002015-01-13T10:06:39.338-06:00Thank you Renee - the example was very helpful and...Thank you Renee - the example was very helpful and your post - so inspiring!Dawn Youngnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-30535029227066413182015-01-13T04:05:03.635-06:002015-01-13T04:05:03.635-06:00Pamela, I can't stress enough the importance o...Pamela, I can't stress enough the importance of reading out loud -- CONSTANTLY! This is what I do when I compose a poem, a story, an article, or an essay. Doesn't matter what it is ... good writing is rhythmical and pleasing to the ear, so there's no other way to do it. Keep reading out loud!Renee LaTulippenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-16413728046615761762015-01-12T22:14:23.313-06:002015-01-12T22:14:23.313-06:00Whoa and Wow! this is an amazing post. I'm so ...Whoa and Wow! this is an amazing post. I'm so grateful to the visual example. I have to see it to get it, ya know. And I got it. Reading my story outloud was an...interesting exercise. Reading it in front of others is even more interesting. But that is what I did. And what did I find? Well, I had lyrical language that I was going to delete. I thought it was just...WRONG. It still might be. However, when I take your class, I'll get gooder at identifying such writing techniques. Great post. I'm so glad you were our first advisor.Pamela Courtneynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-6153146391958305222015-01-12T16:15:46.296-06:002015-01-12T16:15:46.296-06:00You are a poet after my own heart, Renée! Wonderfu...You are a poet after my own heart, Renée! Wonderful stuff!BJ Leenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-75050507970550829862015-01-12T15:51:36.917-06:002015-01-12T15:51:36.917-06:00Thank you, Renee. Wonderful advice with a wonderfu...Thank you, Renee. Wonderful advice with a wonderful example!Tracy Molitorsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-28726016953750986622015-01-12T13:39:28.944-06:002015-01-12T13:39:28.944-06:00Revised yesterday!Revised yesterday!Debbienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-1832507883117637282015-01-12T12:10:43.474-06:002015-01-12T12:10:43.474-06:00What great insights into using all of these techni...What great insights into using all of these techniques. I plan to go back over my ms. now OUT LOUD to see where they might fall flat!Tanya Konermannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-32983035929525232832015-01-12T11:27:19.498-06:002015-01-12T11:27:19.498-06:00Yea, I didn't see the comment section yesterda...Yea, I didn't see the comment section yesterday. Enjoyed the article!Anita Banksnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-2824536201363293672015-01-12T10:53:17.891-06:002015-01-12T10:53:17.891-06:00Well, dang, that's an awfully nice thing to sa...Well, dang, that's an awfully nice thing to say! Sniff.... :)Renee LaTulippenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-52971802094369441242015-01-12T10:25:24.669-06:002015-01-12T10:25:24.669-06:00Why does my heart sing every time I read something...Why does my heart sing every time I read something by Renee? It's Day 2 now and I still hear the music.Sydney O'Neillnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-77700083988797738302015-01-12T09:54:15.080-06:002015-01-12T09:54:15.080-06:00Great post. As I review over and over, I am slowly...Great post. As I review over and over, I am slowly getting it.Linda Schuelernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-47148424546363032132015-01-12T09:26:12.096-06:002015-01-12T09:26:12.096-06:00Thank you for such and in depth interview. It wil...Thank you for such and in depth interview. It will definitely helpLauraJnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-27379934751764363602015-01-12T09:16:26.426-06:002015-01-12T09:16:26.426-06:00Very interesting, Renee! I love your breakdown. (B...Very interesting, Renee! I love your breakdown. (But Carrie said it better. :) )Diana Murrayhttp://www.dianamurray.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-43955300152584357132015-01-12T09:03:21.743-06:002015-01-12T09:03:21.743-06:00I've heard so much about Renee's course an...I've heard so much about Renee's course and seeing her lay it out in this post helped me understand why everyone speaks so highly! Thanks for sharing!Kristen Schroedernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-66878882430053512452015-01-12T09:02:09.456-06:002015-01-12T09:02:09.456-06:00Thanks for the insights Renee!! A lot of useful i...Thanks for the insights Renee!! A lot of useful information about looking at language. Time for another look at my manuscript!Nat Kellernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-4420394265223866192015-01-12T07:32:45.107-06:002015-01-12T07:32:45.107-06:00Wonderful post! Thank you Renee for sharing your w...Wonderful post! Thank you Renee for sharing your wisdom and your time! Love the color coded technique and lyrical language sounds wonderful!Kelly Vavalanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-19315929523829113252015-01-12T06:16:59.508-06:002015-01-12T06:16:59.508-06:00Thank you very much for sharing the pages of text ...Thank you very much for sharing the pages of text and your color coded technique. This is truly a useful, helpful tool.Sharalyn A. Edgebergnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-12271255663362368252015-01-12T06:16:05.426-06:002015-01-12T06:16:05.426-06:00Thank you very much for sharing the pages of text ...Thank you very much for sharing the pages of text and you color coded technique. This is truly a useful, helpful tool.Sharalyn A. Edgebergnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17232670.post-72470927400635565302015-01-12T05:53:28.265-06:002015-01-12T05:53:28.265-06:00I read Walk Two Moons ages ago. I had forgotten h...I read Walk Two Moons ages ago. I had forgotten how lovely the language is. Thanks for marking up the text with explanation of what makes the book sing! Very helpful!Linda Andersennoreply@blogger.com