Stacy Jensen Guest Post - Petite ReviMo March, Day 1

Tuesday, March 11, 2014



Say YES and Write

By Stacy S. Jensen

Recently, I've seen several writers question if it's worth writing a story, when there may be a similar title already published or in the process of being published.

I always vote for write first and think later. Why? Well, publishing is a subjective business. Plus, we get told NO by agents, editors, and our fellow writers enough. We should at least tell ourselves yes and write.




My reality right now —come in close— everything I write may never get published. I don't have an agent. I don't have a manuscript under contract. I write, revise, repeat, and squeeze submit into that process.

By the time, my toddler graduates from high school, I may have a glorified baby book in the form of picture books detailing the antics of bears training to be park rangers and a boy who locks his mother out of the house.

I write a lot of vomit drafts. I work to turn drafts into polished manuscripts with the hopes of publication one day.

A lot of this process is out of my control. So, I focus on what I can control, my story — how I birth it, nurture it, and change it. I can't control a hot-new trend of zombie tooth fairy books, an agent's unspoken wish (or hate) list, or the five books already in the publishing pipeline with a similar storyline.

I wrote about my no rules writing method in 2012. I still do this.

While I'm guilty of mentioning rules, from time to time during critiques, I cling to advice that just tells me to write. Here are a few examples:

•I whip out Romelle Broas' interview with debut author Sherri Dusky Rinker, author of Goodnight, Goodnight Construction Site when I need a reminder. Ringer sent a rhyming, bedtime picture book, unagented, and unsolicited to a major publishing house. She became a New York Times bestseller.

•Rob Sanders, author of Cowboy Christmas, wrote about his first book — a cowboy book with three adult main characters and set at Christmas.

•Deborah Underwood, author of The Quiet Book during ReviMo: "If I'd been trying to write only what I thought would be publishable, I might never have developed those ideas." She also offers a great tip at Julie Hedlund's blog: "Write to please yourself, not the market."

•In Darshana's interview with Salina Yoon, author and illustrator of Penguin and Pinecone, Yoon gave this advice to beginning authors and illustrators: "Make it your goal to CREATE, write, and grow, . . . and not to publish. Keep your eye on the ball … and that ball is to write or illustrate, … and publishing will follow!"

I believe there's no reason to kill a story based on this subjective business of market trends, agent preferences, and rules. Maybe there are no new stories, but it's fun trying to write one.

Let others tell you no, but say yes to yourself and write.


Thank you Stacy! 




 
 
Stacy S. Jensen is as writer and is accustomed to being told no, especially after becoming a mom. She's trying to control the things she can and say YES to story ideas she loves. Connect with her at www.stacysjensen.com.

Petite ReviMo Day 2 - Choose Your Own Adventure!

Saturday, February 15, 2014



Welcome to Petite ReviMo, Day 2!
May your revisions be insightful and plentiful! For more ReviMo info, click here.

 Okay, so today I have something different in store for you! 



Many of you have already seen the revision inspiration sheet. If not, here is a gift for you! Today, pick one of these methods and run with it. My preferred method: Cover your eyes, wave arm at screen and then stop! Yahtzee! Wasn't that fun? :D Or you could use random number generator or pick a favorite number. If not a random pick, how about choosing a method that stretches your comfort zone? Who knows, it "could lead you in surprising and inspiring directions!" to quote Nancy Furstinger (ReviMo Petite Day 1).
Comment here or on the Facebook group and let us know what method is your revision fuel today!

Petite ReviMo February, Day 1 - Nancy Furstinger

Friday, February 14, 2014


Welcome to Petite ReviMo, February 15th & 16th!
May your weekend be revisionful! For more ReviMo info, click here.

Today we have with us, Nancy Furstinger! Welcome Nancy!


“I was working on the proof of one of my poems all the morning, and took out a comma. In the afternoon I put it back again.” –Oscar Wilde

While I’m not as focused on writing the perfect sentence as Oscar Wilde was, I do sometimes have to turn off the critical part of my brain. That snarky part will snarl at me, and insist that every sentence must be perfect or no one will read a single word I write. So I chuck my background as an editor and write what Anne Lamott calls a “Shitty First Draft” in her encouraging book “Bird by Bird.” Then I put away that first draft, but let it percolate in my brain. It’s easier to rewrite and revise when you’ve distanced yourself from your words.

Sometimes you don’t think you can pump out one more word of revision, but then your publisher suggests a brilliant new angle. Suddenly you’re re-invigorated! This happened to me twice, and the resulting books were stronger.

“Creative Crafts for Critters” started out as fun crafts that kids could create for their cats and dogs. My publisher asked me to add birds, fish, and pocket pets to the mix. So I created crafts for the furred, finned, and feathered. These revisions helped me to rack up some great reviews!

My new picture book, “The Forgotten Rabbit,” is loosely based on my huge New Zealand white bunny, Marshmallow, who lived the first three years of her life in a tiny outdoor hutch before transforming into a house rabbit. My publisher suggested incorporating a story line about rabbit agility (a sport similar to dog agility) to appeal to the picture book crowd. Fab idea! I had the young protagonist build a homemade agility course and then later compete with her rabbit at an agility event. I punched up the manuscript with oodles of active verbs. And I was fortunate to be able to work with the illustrator, offering her suggestions about how to depict both types of agility courses and send her photos of Marshmallow racing around and “binkying.” I think kids will really enjoy the exciting action!

Instead of approaching revisions with trepidation, embrace them. They could lead you in surprising and inspiring directions!

Thank you Nancy!








Nancy's been a writer since the third-grade, when her class put on a play she wrote. She thought it was amazing to hear people reading her words, and immediately decided to become a writer.
After college, Nancy started out as a newspaper reporter, interviewing intriguing people and writing about every topic imaginable. Nancy caught the book bug when she worked as a managing editor for two children’s publishing companies. Now I've finally found her niche, working as a freelance writer—the most rewarding job ever! Check out Nancy's books here: http://www.nancyfurstinger.com/books.html.

Drum Roll Please ******** ReviMo 2014 Prize Winners ********

Tuesday, January 21, 2014


Winners of the ReviMo 2014 Prizes are . . .

Monica Lauscher
*Simone Kaplan picture book critique*

Janie Reinart
*Making Picture Book Magic Class*

Becky Fyfe
*Basic Rate Your Story 2014 Membership*

 Lauri C. Meyers
*The Children's Book Academy's Grammar Groove Course*

And even more winners!!!!!!

Hannah Holt
*A chance to submit to Hummingbird Literary*

Judy Rubin
*A critique from Miranda Paul*

Milka Pejovic
*Critique of a query letter from Miranda Paul*

Rena Traxel Boudreau
*Picture book critique Margo Dill, Editor 911*

 Kirsten Larson
*Picture book critique Alayne Kay Christian*

 Lisa Connors
*Nonfiction PB critique Kristen McGill Fulton*

Sharon Putnam 
*A 30-minute consultation with Julie Hedlund*

Julie Beturne
*Beth Stilborn's Flubs 2 Fixes Copy Editing Service for 1 or 2 PB MS*
 
Melanie Ellsworth
*Beth Stilborn's Flubs 2 Fixes Copy Editing Service for One-Page Query Letter*

 Laura Renauld
*Copy of Linda Ashman's Nuts & Bolts of Picture Book Writing*

 Nancy Furstinger
*Signed book and swag from Ame Dyckman*

Winners I will be in touch with you, via email, about collecting your prize. If you don't see my email, check spam folder or contact me! 

Thank you all for participating in ReviMo. As many people said, the best prize is a revised manuscript and putting B.I.C. (booty in chair), but still I wish I had a prize for everyone! There will be more ReviMo events in the future, I hope you'll join us again!

Be sure to check out the CafePress Shop! All proceeds (through Wed. Jan. 22nd) will go to Reading is Fundamental. http://www.cafepress.com/megmillerwriterartist

And if you haven't signed up for Mira's FREE Webinar, Writing Cover Letters and Pitches that Agents and Editors Want to Read, be sure to do so HERE!

ReviMo 2014 Grand Prize Rafflecopter

Saturday, January 18, 2014



WOW! What a wonderful week! I'm so proud of all of you, 1 day of revisions or 7, you did great. Revising stories so short and succinct is tough, but if you're like me, you love this crazy picture book writing journey. Many thanks for joining me!

There is talk of a monthly ReviMo day or a quarterly ReviMo for 4 days or a week, so check back if you are interested!


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2. Under the prize listings, CLICK on the “Revised 5 or 6 Picture Book MS” button OR the "“Revised 7 Picture Book MS” button .
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You can enter the Grand Prize today or tomorrow, only 1 time. Rafflecopter Prizes will be drawn January 20th.

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