Below is a little gift, from me to you. I hope it will inspire many revisions!
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You must (to be eligible for prizes):
1. Register (here). Registration closes at midnight CST 1/11/14.
2. Each day you REVISE (you are on the honor system!) January 12-18th and COMMENT on the day's post, you may enter the Rafflecopter giveaway. January 19th, I will have a separate Rafflecopter giveaway for those people who have revised 5+ days.
3. What counts as REVISING? Making significant and thoughtful changes to a Picture Book Manuscript. If you go through and change a few words that doesn't count! I want you to research and DELVE DEEP! Let's rip our MS apart and put together a best seller! *Fingers crossed*
Wordy Bird, "What’s wrong with my picture book text?" http://cleverbirdy.blogspot.com/2013/12/whats-wrong-with-my-picture-book-text.html
Mem Fox, author of Goodnight, Sleep Tight and Yoo-Hoo, Ladybug!, "20 Dos and Don'ts," http://memfox.com/for-writers-hints/for-writers-20-dos-and-20-donts/
Ame Dyckman, author of BOY+BOT and Tea Party Rules, on how to cut down PB word count! http://writeroutine.blogspot.com/2012/10/wriwopi-ame-dyckman-and-bot-astic-give.html
Linda Ashman, author of Rain and Peace, Baby, "Rhyme Clinic," http://susannahill.blogspot.com/2013/12/rhyme-clinic-with-linda-ashman.html
"Beyond the Bad Beginning," http://www.juliehedlund.com/linda-ashman-november-12-x-12-featured-author/
Corey Rosen Schwartz, author of Three Ninja Pigs and Goldi Rocks and the Three Bears, "How to Get a Black Belt in Rhyme," http://www.juliehedlund.com/corey-schwartz-august-12-x-12-featured-author/
Alayne Kay Christian, author of Butterfly Kisses, "Revising or Polishing Your Picture Book Manuscript," http://alaynekaychristian.wordpress.com/2014/01/06/revising-or-polishing-your-picure-book-manuscript/
Iza Trapani, author of Haunted Party and Rufus and Friends - School Days, "Rhythm and Pattern in a Picture Book," http://blog.janicehardy.com/2012/05/guest-author-iza-trapani-rhythm-and.html
Readability Calculator, http://www.online-utility.org/english/readability_test_and_improve.jsp
What's your favorite blog post on revision?
Feeling bold? How about a Picture Book Dummy?
One way to help see story problems is to make a picture book dummy. If you are like me, this process is much more daunting than it should be.
Take 8 sheets of paper. Fold in half.
Staple (outside with regular staple; in the middle if you are a nerd
and have a long arm stapler – GUILTY!). Et voilĂ !
Tara Lazar, "Picture Book Dummy, Picture Book Construction: Know Your Layout," http://taralazar.com/2009/02/22/picture-book-construction-know-your-layout/
Debbie Ridpath Ohi, "Writing and Illustrating a Book for Simon & Schuster," http://inkygirl.com/inkygirl-main/2012/5/15/writing-illustrating-a-picture-book-for-simon-schuster-books.html
Linda Ashman, "The Wisdom of Making Dummies," http://www.howtowritepicturebooks.com/1/post/2013/10/the-wisdom-of-making-dummies.html
Have you made a PB dummy before, was it helpful?
Meg aspires to be an agented, published children's book author. It's one of her goals for 2014, so it's on like DONKEY KONG publishing world! She has two kiddos, Peep 4 and Speed 2 (nicknames!) who inspire many story ideas and keep her laughing.
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"Writing has so much to give, so much to teach, so many surprises. That thing you had to force yourself to do — the actual act of writing — turns out to be the best part."
-- Anne Lamott "Bird by Bird"
"There isn't really much to say regarding my literary career. It has been made up of two elements: 'hard work' and 'stick to it.'" -- L.M. Montgomery
34 comments :
It's like you're right here in my office space! Thanks for doing all this, I'm excited!
haha! It's creeping me out having a video of myself in the world, but I'm going to leave it. *gulp* Of course!! So glad you're revising with me!! :D
Oh o OH - these look fabulous!! Can't wait to dig in (wish I could this second LOL). Thanks for all the work!
I LOVE your sweet voice!Thanks for the grand effort of pulling all this together, Meg! Very excited!
Oh...my...goodnesss! Links for revisions! Help with rhyme! What an ocean of resources!! This is just amazing! You ROCK! Thank you so much.
I'm running out of space to stick all the stuff I've printed out! (But thanks SO much, Meg! What Pamela Courtney says goes for me, too!) :-)
Ann Lamott said it..."the thing you force yourself to do..." I've found that it is true, that is usually the best part. That's what I'm expecting next week. Love it. This post, Meg, is a KEEPER forever.
LOVE the video too! So fun to hear your voice...and heart.
Yay! Thanks for the great info, Meg! I'm inspired and READY!
Wow! So many great resources and links, and the week hasn't technically started yet. Thanks, Meg.
And disqus hate me. Sigh.
Loved it, Meg! You sound so sweet. :)
This all looks tantalizing, Meg! I can't wait!!
all geared up at 5.51pm Sunday but you sleepy head northerns are still snuffling in your pillows. The time tyranny of separate hemispheres. chuckle
Wow! Great list of revising resources for us to consult - all tied up in one spot with a pretty little bow on top. Thank you!
Thank you, Meg, for these great resources to help us on our way. I am so excited about this!
Yay! I'm glad Charlotte! Happy revising! :D
You're most welcome! Enjoy! :D Hope they fuel lots of revisions.
I've set tomorrow's post earlier for you Cecilia! You early reviser you! :D
Yay!!! Enjoy Sue! Happy revising!
Hooray! Enjoy my friend! Disqus hated me for a long time too. I'm not entirely sure why I added it. Grrr. Good luck lady. :D
You're so welcome Sharon! Enjoy and happy revising!
You're so welcome! Enjoy enjoy! May they fuel many revisions!!
Go Jennifer go!! You're so welcome! Hope you get lots of revising mojo! :D
Aww, thanks Damon! Isn't it ridiculous! My voice makes me cringe, but it was actually fun making a video. I might do another some . . . Year. :D Happy revising!
Thank you! So glad you enjoyed. May it bring you much revision mojo!!!
haha! I completely understand. I actually had a longer list, can you believe it. It seemed slightly insane so I deleted some. :D Happy revising!
Happy revising sweet Teresa! Thanks for popping by! :D
You're SO welcome!! Enjoy enjoy and happy revising! :D
Isn't it hilarious!? In my head I'm much tougher. I hear my own voice and I about fall over. You're so Welcome! Thanks for joining me and HAPPY revising!!!!
Absolutely!! Enjoy enjoy and happy revising! :D
YOU are sweet! My voice is silly, but thank you friend! :D
thank you Meg, living on the bottom part of the world makes it a challenge to be patient. I am so unable to find the words for how important this year is going to be for me and excited does not seem to be enough of a word. Thank you so much for making it easier for me to work in the daylight. grin
Meg! I am loving your blog! your posts are amazing :)
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